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22nd Jul 2011, 1:00 PM
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22nd Jul 2011, 1:26 PM
personally,i think these pages could be compressed in to one page,which could work better,becuase otherwise you're trailing through a few pages for a punchline and by the time you get there it's not really worth it.if the page works as a set up-punchline,it's just structured a bit nicer.this is just webcomics though really.
22nd Jul 2011, 1:43 PM
i think you do have a point, i was a bit afraid of making the previous strip too long, but really it would make a lot more sense if i had posted it all together.
so thanks lot and feel free to come back (: